Your Write Excerpt

The thing that I like most about my author is that he makes his stories different and interesting. They are very controversial and usually contain a lot of discrimination. I want to make a story that leaves an effect on the reader and I want the reader to really enjoy the story.

The story will take place sometime in the 1900s and a lot of people will be going through hardships and tensions are tight between people. I want to make my story intense and something people would want o genuinely want to read. People will be going through food and water scarcity and people are really struggling.

4 horsemen of the apocalypse

The death, war, famine, and pollution. All caused by people or the 4 horsemen. They crave the feeling of destruction. Their everyday consists of this. War, bringing battles every place they go. The war follows like a puppy to a human, wanting attention. Death, causing death to those who don’t deserve it, unknowingly, they are gone in an instant. Starvation, people become hungry, sitting and waiting for food, while their stomach is grumbling, in deep need of nutrients. And pollution, causing the environment to plummet. Slowly deteriorating

Blake, Violet, Ellie, and Elliot all worked at Pizza Hut. Ellie and Elliot were twins but they never got along. It’s probably why the pizzas were sometimes a mess, they could barely go 3 pizzas without having an argument. Ellie was a short-tempered girl. She was always picking fights with people and never knew why, but she thought it was fun. Elliot was kinda the opposite. He was a very shy guy so his personality always clashed with his sister’s. He ate and ate all the time, but never gained any weight.

Blake was the typical football stud. He only worked at Pizza Hut because his mom was forcing him to and would rather be literally anywhere else. He also secretly had a weird hobby of going into the woods to dissect small animals that were already dead. He was actually quite smart, despite people thinking he was incapable of anything to do with academics. Violet was the small girl who sits in the back of the class. She was working 2 other jobs to help her mom pay for their bills. One of her other jobs was working at an automobile shop and helping out with their broken cars, since she was kind of a genius at messing with all things mechanical.

None of them knew it but they all worked at the same Pizza Hut for a reason. They were all destined to save the world.

Bizzaro Writing

My story would be something about that’s all happy and joyful and caring for each other. I’m changing it from tensions between people to people being caring for each other.

Once upon a time there was a kid named Marie and she was 13 years old. She had a couple of friends and was super introverted. She was a very happy child that loved her parents very much. She was super involved at school and loved to get all A’s.

She played the clarinet and loved Band very much. She would never get into drama and everyone loved her. Her parents were proud of raising the she is. She was also student body president and loved her dog. She also volunteered at the veterinarian clinic and hung out with animals. She was a fun loving child.

When she grew older she wanted to become a famous business woman that made a lot of money. She never wanted her attitude to change and always wanted to be down to earth.

High School came along very soon and she was super busy with band, student council and continued to volunteer and the veterinarian clinic. She was still super sweet and helpful. She met a guy she really likes and his name was Noah. Noah was also in the band and he was on the drum line. They started dating very shortly and they were like the cutest couple ever.

Good Omens Done Different

Aziraphale and Crowley met on the 7th day of the world. Azirapahle gave his sword to Adam and Crowley thought this was extremely suspicious. Crowley and Aziraphale met on the 7th day of the world. If James Baldwin were to write this story I think he would’ve added something about racial discrimination and how that played a role in those days.

The arrangement was between Aziraphale and Crowley and how they helped each other and slowly throughout the book they slowly switch roles. Its interesting because demons and angels usually hate each other, but in this case they help each other. They also work together during the baby switch and help each other no matter what.

There were 3 babies in the baby switch. Baby A was named Warlock, baby B who is Greasy Johnson, and baby c who was the Antichrist. The antichrist was named Adam and he ended up living the British.

The 4 horsemen were death, famine, war and pestilence. Death was Scarlet who had red hair and everyone around her died. Famine was white. I think James Baldwin would’ve done something about discrimination here because they’re all different colors.

James Baldwin was all about making things interesting and different. He would’ve added some type of extra character. He would’ve made the babies different races too. I think the two sides of the story would be white and black people instead of heaven and hell. He would’ve made a war of something out of this.

Anathema would’ve still been a witch that was supporting both sides and she would’ve tried to merge both of the sides. I think Newt would’ve been someone from the opposite side and it would be like a cliche love story where people from opposite backgrounds fall in love.

The difference between the Hiding Place and Catch 22

Catch 22 was perceived as making people crazy due to war. Yossarian went crazy and thought he was going die many times. In Catch 22 there was no perspective of the Jews. Yossarian asked to doctors many times to admit him into the hospital so he wouldn’t have to go on missions. He tried to convince Dr. Daneeka that he was going insane.

In the Hiding Place the war made the Jews strong. The formed a Dutch resistance group and fought until they died. They thought fight until we die. They never stopped no matter what. Hans told Attie before going into the orphanage to find Ruta and he said that we fight until we die. He knew that there was a high probability that he was going to die but he was brave and went to go save Ruta.

The second difference is where the movies happened. Catch 22 happened on a military base and there were no big shootings or bombings. There was one bombing that took place but that was done by their general. People were never scared of being executed.

In the Hiding Place there was a house called the Hiding Place where Corrie ten Boom hosted several Jews. They were several times the Nazis raided houses and raided theirs too.

Your Writing

I think for semester project I could’ve done a number of things different/better. I should’ve firstly made more edits of the version and asked a few more people to read through it and see if they can guess the deeper meaning. If they guessed it then I would know it’s pretty clear. I wish I also tried to make my short story longer because I had a lot of ideas but not enough time to execute them well. Next time I would pace myself better and have schedule for myself to stay on track. I think the hardest part for me was staying on track.

The Ballerina

On July 16th, 2000 the earth was blessed with a beautiful shining star named Ella Rose. Ella had huge wonderful eyes, blond hair and was 7 lbs. Ella’s parents were Chris and Amanda and Ella was everything they ever wanted.

A few years passed by and her life was perfect until her dad started acting out. Ella was still young to actually know what was happening around her, but with her mom getting abused her childhood was falling off the rails.

Her parents tried not to argue in front of Ella but it did happen sometimes on accident. One day she and her parents decided to go to the movies and Amanda said “Ella go get dressed so we can be on time for the movie” Ella did as her mother said and went to her room and got dressed. She walked out of her room to see Chris slapping Amanda. Chris screeched “Ella go back into your room, we aren’t going to the movie!” and she went back into her room and started balling out with her favorite stuffed animal, Rhino.

Every time she was sad the one thing that made her happy was watching ballet.

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